雅思6分作文？

例如：To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to student’s house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for a month instead of revise schoo

6分的标准： 在任务完成方面，达到写作任务各项要求、能确切选择有用信息进行全面评述、呈现并强调主要特点或要点，但细节可能与要点无关、不恰当或不准确。 连贯及衔接方面，信息和分论点安排连贯，论证过程清楚，有效使用衔接手段，但句内或句间衔接有错误或显机械呆板，有时指代不清晰或不恰当。 词汇量方面，相对写作任务而言，所运用的词汇量充足，尝试运用非常见词汇但有时出现错误，拼写和构词出现一些错误，但不影响交流 句式多样性及语法准确性方面，混合使用简单和复合句，语法和标点出现一些错误但基本不影响交流。

多背一点范文，增强语感，好好写，6分还是挺容易的。如果觉得自己基础不是很好的情况下，还可以报一下辅导班，这样也是可以的。