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  • 雅思6分作文?

    2020-05-27 | 3个回答 | 19人关注
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  • 181******32 | 2020-05-27
    例如:To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to student’s house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for a month instead of revise schoo
  • 151******37 | 2020-05-27
    6分的标准: 在任务完成方面,达到写作任务各项要求、能确切选择有用信息进行全面评述、呈现并强调主要特点或要点,但细节可能与要点无关、不恰当或不准确。 连贯及衔接方面,信息和分论点安排连贯,论证过程清楚,有效使用衔接手段,但句内或句间衔接有错误或显机械呆板,有时指代不清晰或不恰当。 词汇量方面,相对写作任务而言,所运用的词汇量充足,尝试运用非常见词汇但有时出现错误,拼写和构词出现一些错误,但不影响交流 句式多样性及语法准确性方面,混合使用简单和复合句,语法和标点出现一些错误但基本不影响交流。
  • 138******89 | 2020-05-27
    多背一点范文,增强语感,好好写,6分还是挺容易的。如果觉得自己基础不是很好的情况下,还可以报一下辅导班,这样也是可以的。